You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: • explain which course you are interested in • say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to get information about the course. I was admitted to the MIT
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on a 100 Capitalize word
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percent
grand Change the spelling
per cent
basis
. This
is a foreign institution and I am interested in applying for the scholarship
. This
university is really difficult, so I want to take an extra course. I am very interested in English and computer
.
I have been interested in programming since I was young and I dream of becoming the best expert in Fix the agreement mistake
computers
this
field. I studied very hard for many years. Indeed, many subjects, especially mathematics, English, physics and computer science. After my education, I was admitted to MIT, one of the top 20 universities in the world, on a 100 percent
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per cent
scholarship
basis
. Many famous professors work in this
university.
I would like to get a scholarship
because I have been admitted to this
university on a grand basis
. I believe that all students admitted on the basis
of grand will be paid a scholarship
.
Yours faithfully,
Qobiljonova KamolaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Provide more specific details about the course you want to take, rather than just mentioning that it's difficult. This will make your letter more informative and focused.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your sentences flow more smoothly by using transitional phrases. This will enhance the overall coherence of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and respectful, which sets a professional tone for the letter.
task achievement
You have maintained a suitably formal tone throughout the letter, which is important for such a request.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph addresses a distinct idea, making it easier to follow your points.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite