The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuels source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the production of electricity with different energy in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, Australians are more inclined to use the coal rather than the oil
and natural gas in 1980 and 2020. However
, French
used more Correct article usage
the French
on
nuclear Change preposition
apply
power
in 2000.
According to
the first chart, half of the total generation consisted of coal, and this
amount went up dramatically to 130 units
in the end. Despite the fact that Hydropower saw a rising trend, by 16 from 36 to 20 units
, natural gas and oil
declined, to 2 units
each .
The second graph shows, in 1980, coal and natural power
shared a similar proportion together totalling 50 units
, and the former remained stable and the latter decreased substantially (2 units
)
at the end
of the period.
Additionally
, in the beginning , the share of oil
, nuclear power
and Hydropower was 20, 15 and 5 units
, respectively. Production from hydropower dropped merely 2 units
, although
the electricity generation from nuclear power
and oil
, with a dramatic increase to 126 and 25 units
.Submitted by chartakinnovation on
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