The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
map
shows how a village
called Ryemouth has evolved from 1995 till present. There have been industrial and residential changes, the most noticeable being the increases in amenities in this
area.
In 1995, to the east of the village
there was Add a comma
village,
green
zone featuring farmland and Correct article usage
a green
forest
park. Next to Correct article usage
a forest
this
was housing on both sides of the road located in the north-west of the map
. Generally speaking, a lot of recreational facilities were situated mostly to the south of the village
. For instance
, the seaside was the hotspot for residents as it included a place to go shopping and to eat. Moreover
, the fishing port was constructed there with the fish market nearby.
Turning to the present-day map
, it can be seen that the green area is reduced and converted into sports
area with a golf course and tennis courts. A Correct article usage
a sports
further
noticeable change is development
of the car park on the right side of the hotel so the visitors can travel there Add an article
the development
a development
with
Change preposition
by
cars
. The eating spot of the Fix the agreement mistake
car
village
is enlarged by developing restaurant
. Correct article usage
a restaurant
Although
the old houses remain, its
number significantly Correct pronoun usage
their
increases
Wrong verb form
increased
as well as
the new apartments in the south-west of the map
are developed so the village
has more residential buildings in
present.
Change preposition
at
To sum up
, the village
of Ryemouth
shows significant changes between 1995 and Correct your spelling
Tynemouth
present
. The Correct article usage
the present
numbers
of houses and recreational facilities has increased.Fix the agreement mistake
number
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