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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the chart illustrates data about the
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global
globas
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global
 forest in five different countries
overall
,
its
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it
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 can clearly observed that all
percentage
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percentages
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has been
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have
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 increased
accept
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except in
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 Africa . and
the
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apply
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south America has the most increasing in all five countries . the percentage
of
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in
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north
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North
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 America was 25% and shows increased
until
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to
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 30 % ,
while
 , the
remain
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remaining
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 competitors ,
europe
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Europe
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,
Asia
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and Asia
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 . shows
up ward
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upward
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 trend
in
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of
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approximatly
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approximately
 2% in Europe and 4% in Asia .
furthermore
 in
south
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South
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 America there is the highest resurgence to the high point in the chart
in
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at
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 around 7 % . in Africa the is a huge
downword
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downward
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which
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wich
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which
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 fell around 18% and
represent
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represents
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 the lowest percentage in all five countries
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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