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The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart indicates how many international scholars studied
at
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 the United Kingdom
university
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 over a three-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest number of
students
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 were local
men
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 in British
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university
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universities
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.
However
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,women international
students
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 did not tend to study majors in the UK
university
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. In 2012,precisely 45 female
students
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 studied majors at the United Kingdom
university
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 (Which was the highest number of learners over the period),just ahead of the percentage of
students
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 who were British women with just under 45 in 2011.
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,studying lessons at
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 UK
university
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 by local
men
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students
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 was slightly more popular than international
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men
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students
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 with approximately 43 and 39 in 2012,
repectively
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respectively
.
In contrast
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,foreign women learners did not prefer to finish their
study
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studies
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 at
the
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 UK
university
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 roughly 14 in 2010.(Which was the least number of
studnets
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students
 over the whole year).
In addition
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,going to
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 in England by
men
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 who were British home
students
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was
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 a bit the same as international
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men
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male
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 scholars with nearly 24 and 23 in 2011,respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, students, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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