Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Some people support investing

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the government in arts

such

as playing music and

theater

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.

While some

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argue and prefer spending

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these money

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in

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public services

instead

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. On the one hand, the investment of government in various sorts of arts has a huge

advantageous

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.

Furthermore

, inserting could develop many talents

individual

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especially when they are inserting it in school.

However

, it is considered as entertainment for residents.

For instance

, the government in Saudi Arabia invested in

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the theater

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theater

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recently, which was a great experience for children and families.

On the other hand

,

while

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some people consider public services as

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priorities. Expenditure

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education and public transportation

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providing a house for nations is better. Establishing and constructing

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these

basic

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can assist in

growth

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of countries and

provides

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a

health

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environment for

family

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families

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.

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, many

of

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governments

refused

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the

investment

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in health and

providing

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an

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insurance for people to receive treatment because they consider it costly

while

it is their responsibility. In conclusion, I

am

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completely

agreeing

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with

balance

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the balance

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between spending

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money. Allocate enough budgets for basic

requirement

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requirements

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for inhabitants and kids and emphasize of availability of these facilities.

Along with

improving their talent and

supporting

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.