Museum and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than show the cultures or artworks or other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museum's

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play a crucial role in showcasing the

art

and

history

from the past of the country. There has been an argument that

art

galleries'

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and museums must only concentrate on the

culture

and

history

of local

people

than

from

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the other counterparts. I agree

both

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the

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sides of

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statement, as one can benefit their own nation

to attract

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tourism and fundamental right for

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citizens

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to know about their

cultures

and even the local

artist

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should be supported. In

this

essay

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I shall elaborate my point of

views

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. The most conspicuous thing about the

art

gallery and

museum

are they reserve the

art

and information from the past that

people

can influence by watching.

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the most common factor that these

places

are attracted by tourism

to

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is to

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watch the country's

culture

and

history

.

Although

they are few local

artist

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who can do imaginary work in painting sculptures they need to be given

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to exhibit their work in

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the gallery

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gallery

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and even from other international

art

and

culture

should be displayed as

people

come to know about all the things in one particular place and they enjoy the serenity of

such

exotic

places

.

For example

, India which is

diversed

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diverse

and known for the beauty of

cultures

they

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reserve

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their clothing, their style, and the war equipment to show their

cultures

to different

people

so they can collect information and even international collection from different

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can be seen in that

museum

.

On the other hand

, It is beneficial for growth in income and

cultures

that

these kind

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of

places

become globally famous and tourist

attraction

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for the

people

they

do

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visit to watch the

art

and become famous attraction

places

.

Moreover

, it is a human right to know the

history

and

culture

specially

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for

the

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young children, schools and universities should be responsible

to take

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for taking

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children to

such

informative

places

like exhibition archives so children may acquire knowledge.

To conclude

, from the above discussion, I agree with both

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side

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of the statement that local

artist

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artists

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should

also

be prioritized in exhibiting their

art

in

museum

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museums

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so

individual

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can get encouragement and international

culture

and

history

should

also

be displayed

to

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so

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people

can get knowledge about other counterparts.