A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it. Write a letter to your friend to ask if he is interested in buying your car. In your letter, • explain why you are selling your car • describe the good points and any bad points about your car • suggest the friend visits you to see and drive your car

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Dear David, I am writing

this

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letter to tell you about my black

car

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which I would like to sell. I want to trade my Honda Civic as I will go on

road

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a road

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trip with my husband and parents.

Thus

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, I need

extra

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an extra

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vacent

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vacant

van for that and my

car

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is not suitable for that.

Therefore

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and my husband decided to sell it out as I know that you are always

intrested

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interested

in my

car

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. So, I am informing you about

this

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if you

are

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would

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now like to purchase it.

Firts

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First

of all, I would like to tell you about

condition

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the condition

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of my

car

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's radio is not that much good as compared to modern cars. I know you are

intrested

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interested

in listening

music

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to music

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and

this

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might

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apply

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affect you.

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this

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this,

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it is eight years old but the

overall

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mileage capacity of

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car

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the car

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is excellent. I think it is convenient for you to go to your work

as well as

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holiday trips with family.

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, let me know by phone call or written message whether you are

intrested

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interested

in my

car

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. I suggest you that at least visit my home once and take a test drive. Waiting for your reply. Yours lovingly, Sophia Brown.

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Make sure to proofread your text to catch spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'intrested' instead of 'interested' and 'firts' instead of 'first.'

complete response

Provide more details in your response to fully address why you are selling the car and what benefits it could bring to your friend.

greeting and closing

You have included a greeting and a closing, which helps to make your letter sound polite and friendly.

logical structure

Your letter follows a logical structure with paragraphs dedicated to specific points of information.

suitable writing tone

Your tone is appropriate for writing to a friend, as it is conversational and friendly.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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