The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the
production
and consumption
of electricity
in the top ten countries during 2014.
Overall
, China was the highest trend in 2004 with about 5.300 billion kWh in production
and consumption
of electricity
.
According to
what was shown in the graph, the United States was the second trend after China in electricity
production
and consumption
. What is more, the amount of production
electricity
in Russia was the same level as the amount of electricity
consumption
by 1 billion kWh.
In addition
to that, the number of electricity
production
increased slightly than the consumption
of electricity
in four countries: Japan, India, Canada and France around 1 billion kWh.Moreover
, the electricity
consumption
of Germany went up more than electricity
production
.Submitted by um.maktoum2014 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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