The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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report derives from the maps, which depict the justification that occurred to a region of Willington over three different years 1780, 1860, and 2000. As an initial overlook, we can note that in 1780 the town was a rural area
as well as
like the forest. There were four farms, two villages and numerous woods. Not only is
this
point clear
also
the habitats were few with just 100 houses. In 1860 the population was escalating,
reached
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200 houses.
In contrast
, there was a sharp fall in the woods.
Furthermore
, just two farms were there.
On the other hand
, appeared some facilities
as
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such as
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a
roud
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road
round
in the north, and a bridge above the river.
Finally
, the rural inhibited from the town and became a modern area. A more detailed look at the third map reveals that
,
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the farms have been disappearing and there was not any wood. There was a significant
increasing
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in the number of villages and homes with 500 .
Moreover
, on
riverside
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the riverside
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, there
was
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plenty of shops and structured a
roroute
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reroute
route
transported from homes to schools and sports fields.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural
  • undeveloped
  • substantially
  • railway line
  • market area
  • extensive urbanization
  • population growth
  • industrial areas
  • shopping centers
  • network of roads
  • public facilities
  • comparison
  • transformation
  • evolution
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