The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the maps, which depict the justification that occurred to a region of Willington over three different years 1780, 1860, and 2000.
As an initial overlook, we can note that in 1780 the town was a rural area as well as
like the forest. There were four farms, two villages and numerous woods. Not only is this
point clear also
the habitats were few with just 100 houses.
In 1860 the population was escalating, reached
200 houses. Wrong verb form
reaching
In contrast
, there was a sharp fall in the woods. Furthermore
, just two farms were there. On the other hand
, appeared some facilities as
a Correct quantifier usage
such as
roud
in the north, and a bridge above the river.
Correct your spelling
road
round
Finally
, the rural inhibited from the town and became a modern area. A more detailed look at the third map reveals that,
the farms have been disappearing and there was not any wood. There was a significant Remove the comma
apply
increasing
in the number of villages and homes with 500 . Replace the word
increase
Moreover
, on riverside
, there Add an article
the riverside
was
plenty of shops and structured a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
roroute
transported from homes to schools and sports fields.Correct your spelling
reroute
route
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