The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the amount of money spent on
fuel
across the whole level
of community in the US and UK.
Overall
, we can see that there is an increasing trend among poor people while
this
feather decreases in the richest level
of each population.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, it is evident that while
the percentage of income is climbing people spend a rising amount of money on fuel
until the level
of middle-income in the UK. This
figure fluctuates between 3 and 4 percent
until the middle of the richest. Surprisingly, Change the spelling
per cent
after
this
stage, an escalation begins in fuel
spending level
.
Regarding the US Fix the agreement mistake
levels
population
it is notable that for spending Add a comma
population,
fuel
peak the highest number (over 5) in the middle of poor people, followed by Correct article usage
a gradually
gradually
fall in the rest of the population. It is seeable that in between middle-income and richest spending Change the word
gradual
fuel
is equal for both of country (the low of 4 percent
)Change the spelling
per cent
Submitted by i.nureddinn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, level with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼