The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the amount of money spent on
fuel
across the whole
level
of community in the US and UK.
Overall
, we can see that there is an increasing trend among poor people
while
this
feather decreases in the richest
level
of each population. Looking at the line graph in more detail, it is evident that
while
the percentage of income is climbing people spend a rising amount of money on
fuel
until the
level
of middle-income in the UK.
This
figure fluctuates between 3 and 4
percent
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until the middle of the richest. Surprisingly,
after
this
stage, an escalation begins in
fuel
spending
level
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levels
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. Regarding the US
population
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population,
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it is notable that for spending
fuel
peak the highest number (over 5) in the middle of poor people, followed by
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a gradually
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gradually
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fall in the rest of the population. It is seeable that in between middle-income and richest spending
fuel
is equal for both of country (the low of 4
percent
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)
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, level with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditures
  • disparities
  • evolved
  • fluctuations
  • stabilization
  • significant gap
  • trends
  • economic conditions
  • vehicular technology
  • public transportation
  • summarise
  • comparison
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