The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line graph shows the total
number
of people
participating in five different activities at a particular social centre in Melbourne, Australia, between 2000 and 2020.
It is clear that
the majority opted to join the film club during the given period. Moreover
, there was a significant rise in the number
of people
playing table tennis. In contrast
, there were no participants in musical performances from 2000 to 2005.
Looking at the information in more detail, there were around 65 people
participating in the film club in 2000, and this
number
slightly decreased to 60 in 2010. Afterwards, it gradually rose to 66 people
by 2020. As for martial arts, the number
of participants fluctuated between approximately 31 and 38.
In terms of the number
of participants in amateur dramatics, it peaked at approximately 29 people
in 2005 and then
gradually diminished to 5 people
by 2020. Furthermore
, the number
of people
playing table tennis grew dramatically from 20 in 2005 to around 50 by 2020. Additionally
, the number
of people
engaging in musical performances remained between 10 and 20 from 2010 to 2020.Submitted by zora840810 on
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