The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the picture below. Write at least 150 words.
The given flow chart illustrates the process of drinking
water
by collecting from the rainwater in Australian city.
Overall
, there are five stages shown from collected, processed, and distribution of water
to houses.
Initially
, the rainwater is collected from rooftops. Then
it will flow through a drain system until reach the water
filter for impurities and debris. When the latter is complete, the water
is stored in large storage to ensure a constant supply to the people. Following
this
, the water
will be treated inside a machine called water
treatment. The treatment process is needed to make sure it safe to drink, and this
often includes chemical disinfection.
Lastly
, as soon as the treated water
is complete, it will be pumped through a distribution system to any places that needed for use as drinking water
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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