The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table show the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar charts illustrate the information about the selling achimenes of 5 various categories
such
as petroleum Linking Words
products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural Use synonyms
products
and textiles between 2015 and 2016. Use synonyms
Overall
, there is a mild increase in three industrial classifications but in germs and jewellery Linking Words
as well as
in agricultural Linking Words
products
the export trend is stable.
Petroleum Use synonyms
products
and engineered goods are important required Use synonyms
products
among 5 categories so in 2015 the export value for both Use synonyms
products
was just under 60 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
. Between 2015 and 2016 the growth rate in sales for petroleum Use synonyms
products
is 3% and for engineered materials is 8.5 %. The same trend was Use synonyms
also
observed in the market overseas of textiles as in 2015 it was just under 30 Linking Words
billion
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dollars
and in 2016 there was a significant peak of nearly 15.24% reaching over 30 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
.
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Although
in the three categories, there is a significant effort for growth in the category of gems and jewellery production there is a gradual decline between 2015 and 2016 Linking Words
nearly
5.18%. The same tendency was Change preposition
of nearly
also
indicated in agricultural Linking Words
products
as it remains steady at just over 30 Use synonyms
billion
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dollars
.
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