the table below shows data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

the table below shows data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The
chart
displays data about the
number
of people who have travelled using three major British
airports
over a sextennial period between 1998 to 2003. In general, it can be seen that
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there are upward trends in the
number
of
travellers
for these
airports
over the time period covered by the
chart
.
Although
there are some
difference
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between them. Looking at the
chart
, as regards the
number
of
travellers
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in the first three
year
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. After that, despite falling sharply in the next two
year
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, the
number
rose greatly in 2003 to reach 45.6
million
. With respect to the
number
of
travellers
for Stansted, it started at 17.3
million
which meant it had far
less
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travellers
than the other
airports
.
Following
this
, Stansted had a
sharply
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rise in the first four
year
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to reach 43.3
million
in 2001,
However
the figure remained the same for
next
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two
year
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.
On the other hand
, Gatwick had a strikingly
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over the time covered by the
chart
and peaked at 69.3
million
which
it
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is the largest
number
of
travellers
among the other
airports
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, number, airports, travellers, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • significant
  • milestone
  • growth rate
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overview
  • infer
  • analyze
  • data
  • period
  • highlight
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • steady
  • remarkable
  • notable
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