the table below shows data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

the table below shows data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
chart
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displays data about the
number
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of people who have travelled using three major British
airports
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over a sextennial period between 1998 to 2003. In general, it can be seen that
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there are upward trends in the
number
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of
travellers
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for these
airports
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over the time period covered by the
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.
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there are some
difference
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between them. Looking at the
chart
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, as regards the
number
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of
travellers
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for
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Heathrow, there was a steady
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in the first three
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year
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. After that, despite falling sharply in the next two
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year
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, the
number
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rose greatly in 2003 to reach 45.6
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. With respect to the
number
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of
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for Stansted, it started at 17.3
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which meant it had far
less
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travellers
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than the other
airports
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.
Following
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this
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, Stansted had a
sharply
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rise in the first four
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year
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to reach 43.3
million
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in 2001,
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the figure remained the same for
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the next
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two
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year
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.
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, Gatwick had a strikingly
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over the time covered by the
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and peaked at 69.3
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which
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is the largest
number
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of
travellers
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among the other
airports
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, number, airports, travellers, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • significant
  • milestone
  • growth rate
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overview
  • infer
  • analyze
  • data
  • period
  • highlight
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • steady
  • remarkable
  • notable
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