the table below shows data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The
chart
displays data about the number
of people who have travelled using three major British airports
over a sextennial period between 1998 to 2003.
In general, it can be seen that,
there are upward trends in the Remove the comma
apply
number
of travellers
for these airports
over the time period covered by the chart
. Although
there are some difference
between them.
Looking at the Fix the agreement mistake
differences
chart
, as regards the number
of travellers
for
Heathrow, there was a steady Change preposition
to
grow
in the first three Replace the word
growth
year
. After that, despite falling sharply in the next two Change to a plural noun
years
year
, the Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
rose greatly in 2003 to reach 45.6 million
. With respect to the number
of travellers
for Stansted, it started at 17.3 million
which meant it had far less
Change the quantifier
fewer
travellers
than the other airports
. Following
this
, Stansted had a sharply
rise in the first four Change the adverb
sharp
year
to reach 43.3 Change to a plural noun
years
million
in 2001, However
the figure remained the same for next
two Correct article usage
the next
year
.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
On the other hand
, Gatwick had a strikingly grow
over the time covered by the Replace the word
growth
chart
and peaked at 69.3 million
which it
is the largest Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of travellers
among the other airports
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