The diagram below shows. How a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

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as a type of biofuel is made.

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, it is evident that there are 10 main stages during the production of

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. The first

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commencing

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with

absorbing

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the absorption of

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sunlight plus carbon dioxide by trees and the final

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ending

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with

producing

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the production of

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carbon dioxide by human-made vehicles.

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with, in the first

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, trees need

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CO2

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and sunlight to

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. During

harvesting

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the harvesting

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process

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all these plants and trees’ products are gathered. Following that, these gathered plants are gone through machines

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and convert

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into cellulose. In the fifth

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these results are processed,

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then

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in the sixth

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, sugar is manufactured. As can be seen, in the seventh

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, microbes are added to the sugar,

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in the subsequent

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,

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is produced.

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resulted

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results

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is be

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used by vehicles,

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as cars, trucks and

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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which can generate more carbon dioxide and donate

them

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to the clean air.

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was the cycle of generating

of

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