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The chart shows the infromation relating to people within 15 minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below

The chart shows the infromation relating to people within 15 minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below
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The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minutes of driving
service
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 in an unspecific area in the UK and compares two
areas
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.
Overall
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, what stands out from the line graph is that people acquired a significant amount of
service
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 in urban
areas
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 as compared to rural
areas
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. Looking at the details, starting with healthcare services, nearly all urban dwellers are within a 15-minute
drive
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 of a doctor,
while
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 the figure for rural residents is the same. Regarding postal
service
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, 100% of the urban
areas
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 and 90% of rural residents live within a 15-minute
drive
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 of a post office. If we look at the education facilities, both urban and rural dwellers are within a 15-minute
drive
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 of secondary school. People within 15 minutes of driving
service
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 around 100% of primary school urban residents,
however
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, around 65% of rural dwellers are within a 15-minute
drive
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words service, areas, drive with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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