The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minute drive service in an unspecific area in UK and comparing between two areas in urban and rural.

The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minute drive service in an unspecific area in UK and comparing between two areas in urban and rural.
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The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minutes of driving
service
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in an unspecific area in the UK and compares two
areas
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.
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, what stands out from the line graph is that people acquired a significant amount of
service
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in urban
areas
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as compared to rural
areas
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. Looking at the details, starting with healthcare services, nearly all urban dwellers are within a 15-minute
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of a doctor,
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the figure for rural residents is the same. Regarding postal
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, 100% of the urban
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and 90% of rural residents live within a 15-minute
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of a post office. If we look at the education facilities, both urban and rural dwellers are within a 15-minute
drive
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of secondary school. People within 15 minutes of driving
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around 100% of primary school urban residents,
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, around 65% of rural dwellers are within a 15-minute
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.
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