The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minute drive service in an unspecific area in UK and comparing between two areas in urban and rural.
The bar chart gives data about people within 15 minutes of driving
service
in an unspecific area in the UK and compares two areas
.
Overall
, what stands out from the line graph is that people acquired a significant amount of service
in urban areas
as compared to rural areas
.
Looking at the details, starting with healthcare services, nearly all urban dwellers are within a 15-minute drive
of a doctor, while
the figure for rural residents is the same. Regarding postal service
, 100% of the urban areas
and 90% of rural residents live within a 15-minute drive
of a post office.
If we look at the education facilities, both urban and rural dwellers are within a 15-minute drive
of secondary school. People within 15 minutes of driving service
around 100% of primary school urban residents, however
, around 65% of rural dwellers are within a 15-minute drive
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