The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart illustrates the number of people living in cities between four Asian countries from 1970 to 2020. It is

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given the predicted amount of people for 2030 and 2040.

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, all four countries show an upward trend,

Malaysia

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with Malaysia

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at the top and Thailand at the lowest. In 1970, Malaysia and

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Philippines

shows

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almost the same percentage. In 1990, there was a slight difference and after that in 2040, there was a 30% difference.

Malysia

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Malaysia

at 75% and

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the philippines

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philippines

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at 50%. In 1970, Indonesia and Thailand were at 10% and 20%. In 1990,

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they

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were at the same point and there was

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the

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increase in

Indonesia

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Indonesia's

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population and in 2040 it will be at 55%. There was a slight difference in

Thailand

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Thailand's

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population.

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