The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the number of people living in cities between four Asian countries from 1970 to 2020. It is increase in
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given the predicted amount of people for 2030 and 2040. Linking Words
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, all four countries show an upward trend, Linking Words
Malaysia
at the top and Thailand at the lowest.
In 1970, Malaysia and Change preposition
with Malaysia
Philipphines
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Philippines
shows
almost the same percentage. In 1990, there was a slight difference and after that in 2040, there was a 30% difference.
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show
Malysia
at 75% and Correct your spelling
Malaysia
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the philippines
philippines
at 50%.
In 1970, Indonesia and Thailand were at 10% and 20%. In 1990, Change the capitalization
Philippines
there
were at the same point and there wasCorrect pronoun usage
they
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Indonesia
population and in 2040 it will be at 55%. There was a slight difference in Change noun form
Indonesia's
Thailand
population.Change noun form
Thailand's
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