The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates the process which shows how
sugar
is made from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, Linking Words
this
production has 6 various stepsLinking Words
which is
starting from the frame and ending in drying and cooling that has Verb problem
,
sugar
powder.
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According to
the diagram, at the start, it is important that Linking Words
sugar
cones spend between 12 to 18 months in the soil; Use synonyms
then
farmer or agriculture device harvests them; Linking Words
thereafter
, the crushing starts, so at Linking Words
this
stage, Linking Words
sugar
cones are going to the tools and alter to Use synonyms
juice
.
The graph demonstrates that Use synonyms
juice
, which is from Use synonyms
sugar
coins, goes to the purifying Use synonyms
juice
and is separated from waste by a limestone filter after that, put Use synonyms
juice
in the evaporator Use synonyms
that is
heated by fire to become Linking Words
syrup
. Later, Use synonyms
syrup
, from the Use synonyms
last
section, is centrifuged to separate the Linking Words
sugar
crystal from the Use synonyms
syrup
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
syrup
goes to the device that makes Use synonyms
sugar
by drying Use synonyms
syrup
and cooling it.Use synonyms
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