The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares the most advanced 10 countries
both
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in both
consumpted
and generated in the year 2014.
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consumption
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, In 2014, Linking Words
China
and the USA, by far, were the leading 2 countries in terms of producing and consuming electric power, and they were able to provide Use synonyms
power
needed. Only Add an article
the power
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Germany
however
, had to import it.
In comparison to Linking Words
other
8 countries, Correct article usage
the other
China
and the United States were the most significant producer and consumer domains. Use synonyms
With
producing almost 5.4 Change preposition
By
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billions
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billion
kWh
and Use synonyms
by
using nearly 5.3 Change preposition
apply
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billions
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billion
kWh
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China
had the most significant amount of Use synonyms
electric
in and out. The United States followed Replace the word
electricity
China
, Use synonyms
total
production and consumption by just under 4.1 Change preposition
in total
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billions
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billion
kWh
and around 3.9 Use synonyms
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billions
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billion
kWh
.
With the Use synonyms
exceptions
of Fix the agreement mistake
exception
China
and the USA, Russia was the merely country that could both generate and consume Use synonyms
electric
over 1 billion Replace the word
electricity
kWh
. Each figure was so close to Use synonyms
each
other, which was slightly over 1 billion Correct determiner usage
the
kWh
. Russia was followed by Japan, India, Canada, France, Use synonyms
Brasil
, Germany and Correct your spelling
Brazil
Korea
Republic, respectively. Correct your spelling
Korean
Finally
, Germany was the only country Linking Words
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where that
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figure Correct determiner usage
the
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for
electric
produced was less than Replace the word
electricity
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the electric
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consumed and they were around 0.55 Replace the word
electricity
kWh
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, billions, kwh with synonyms.
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