The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph and pie chart illustrate information about crime in the United Kingdom for the

last

year.

overall

, the line graph shows that most of the

crimes

were by

people

aged between 16 to 20.

on the other hand

, the chart

presents

Verb problem

shows

show examples

that the greatest percentage was for violent crime. Individuals start making

crimes

when they are between 8 and 12 around 5

thousand

then

the number of

crimes

had a significant increase to the

people

aged between 12 and 16 to 70

thousand

people

aged between 16 and 20 had 80

thousand

crimes

On the other hand

, youth aged 20 to 24 had only 60

thousand

crimes

People

aged from 28 to 40 had a little under 20

thousand

However

people

from age 44 to 60 were around ten

thousand

crimes

. Violent

crimes

in the UK had the highest percentage 46 per cent. but property comes and drug

crimes

were just over a fifth.

In addition

, public order

crimes

were a little under ten per cent.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Topic Vocabulary:

The line graph depicts
The pie chart illustrates
reveals
displays
depicts
the trend of
the overall crime rate
steadily decreased
the distribution of
different types of crime
prevalent
accounts for
the most common crime
followed by
make up
a smaller proportion of
the total crimes
a smaller percentage
approximately
the remaining percentage
It is important to note that
reflects

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