the maps below show the center of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

the maps below show the center of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The provided maps show the current situation of Islip town
center
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and the future plan for
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. It is
eviedent
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evident
that, there will have been
considrable
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considerable
changes in
this
area,
the
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center
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of Islip will keep its small size
druing
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during
the breakthroughs.
In addition
, there will be some significant changes in
road
networks around the town
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,
shops
, and
park
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parks
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. Notably, the future plan will have consistent new facilities
such
as new housing and
car
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park
. At the moment,
shops
are located on
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either side of Main
road
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on
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the
northren
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northern
part of the downtown. Behind
shops
, there is a
country side
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. For reaching the far south, the Main
road
has a
connection
from
west
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which
is ended
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up with housing.
Moreover
, the western
connection
from Main
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has a link reaching to school. Another
connection
of Mainroad is on the east ending with
park
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the park
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which has a path connected to
main
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road
. It is planned to extend roads by building
two way
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roads all around the
center
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of the town.
Main
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road
will be replaced by
area
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only for
pedesterians
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pedestrians
.
Besides
, all the
shops
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at the north of Main
road
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will be altered by bus
station
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stations
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on the west and
new
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built housing on the east with a
connection
to the
road
networks. A car
park
and
shoping
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shopping
center
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will be located between
bus
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station and
new
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the new
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housing.
Additionally
, the number of housing will be doubled to 4,
while
park
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will have become smaller, the school will
expanded
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a little.
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