the maps below show the center of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The provided maps show the current situation of Islip town
center
and the future plan for Change the spelling
centre
developing
.
It is Replace the word
development
eviedent
that, there will have been Correct your spelling
evident
considrable
changes in Correct your spelling
considerable
this
area, the
Correct word choice
and the
center
of Islip will keep its small size Change the spelling
centre
druing
the breakthroughs. Correct your spelling
during
In addition
, there will be some significant changes in road
networks around the town center
, Change the spelling
centre
shops
, and park
. Notably, the future plan will have consistent new facilities Fix the agreement mistake
parks
such
as new housing and car
Correct article usage
a car
park
.
At the moment, shops
are located on the
either side of Main Remove the article
apply
road
Capitalize word
Road
on
the Change preposition
in
northren
part of the downtown. Behind Correct your spelling
northern
shops
, there is a country side
. For reaching the far south, the Main Correct your spelling
countryside
road
has a connection
from west
which Add an article
the west
is ended
up with housing. Wrong verb form
ends
Moreover
, the western connection
from Main road
has a link reaching to school. Another Capitalize word
Road
connection
of Mainroad is on the east ending with park
which has a path connected to Add an article
the park
main
Change the article
the main
road
.
It is planned to extend roads by building two way
roads all around the Add a hyphen
two-way
center
of the town. Change the spelling
centre
Main
Change the article
The main
road
will be replaced by area
only for Correct article usage
an area
pedesterians
. Correct your spelling
pedestrians
Besides
, all the shops
locating
at the north of Main Wrong verb form
located
road
will be altered by bus Capitalize word
Road
station
on the west and Fix the agreement mistake
stations
new
built housing on the east with a Change the adjective
newly
connection
to the road
networks. A car park
and shoping
Correct your spelling
shopping
center
will be located between Change the spelling
centre
bus
station and Add an article
the bus
new
housing. Correct article usage
the new
Additionally
, the number of housing will be doubled to 4, while
park
will have become smaller, the school will Add an article
the park
expanded
a little.Change the verb form
expand
be expanded
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