You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table provides information about the change in people who went on international travel in d rapidly to 390.3 in the next 10 years, and
then
in
2005
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2005,
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Europe reached the highest numb1990,1995,2000 and 2005. The unit is measured in millions.
Overall
,it can be seen that the maximum
number
of
travellers
was in Europe in 2005,
while
the lowest
number
was in the Middle East in 1990.
To begin
, in 1990 Europe recorded 280.2 million
travellers
, and
then
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increaseer
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increase
increases
of 400 million
travellers
.
Furthermore
, the travellerstravelers in Asia and the Pacific was 60.2 in 1990, and
then
the
number
of
travellers
rose sharply to 135.8
at the end
of the period.
While
the
number
of
travellers
in America began at 80.5 and jumped to 113.2 in 2005.
Conversely
, The Middle East experienced the lowest
number
in the statistics of only 9.8 and
then
went up gradually to 15.8 over the period.
Likewise
, Africa had a
number
of
travellers
of 18.2 in 1990 and
then
increased slowly to 28.7 in 2005.
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