The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the change in people who went on international travel in d rapidly to 390.3 in the next 10 years, and
then
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in
2005
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2005,
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Europe reached the highest numb1990,1995,2000 and 2005. The unit is measured in millions.
Overall
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,it can be seen that the maximum
number
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of
travellers
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was in Europe in 2005,
while
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the lowest
number
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was in the Middle East in 1990.
To begin
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, in 1990 Europe recorded 280.2 million
travellers
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, and
then
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increaseer
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increase
increases
of 400 million
travellers
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.
Furthermore
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, the travellerstravelers in Asia and the Pacific was 60.2 in 1990, and
then
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the
number
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of
travellers
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rose sharply to 135.8
at the end
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of the period.
While
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the
number
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of
travellers
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in America began at 80.5 and jumped to 113.2 in 2005.
Conversely
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, The Middle East experienced the lowest
number
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in the statistics of only 9.8 and
then
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went up gradually to 15.8 over the period.
Likewise
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, Africa had a
number
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of
travellers
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of 18.2 in 1990 and
then
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increased slowly to 28.7 in 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, travellers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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