The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the previous plan for the
village
of Ryemouth in 1995 and its current condition.
Overall
, it is noticeable that before
this
village
had a big forest
park
,
however
, there is nothing left of
this
park
.
Moreover
, we can notice that they've built a fishing port and some new fish markets. The
village
of Reymouth originally consisted of farmland to the east-north, but
this
has now been replaced by golf courts and the forest
park
associated with the farmland has
also
been destroyed and changed by new tennis courts. We can see that the
village
now has no fishing port to the south of
this
map and some fish markets because
now
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they have replaced the markets with apartments.
Additionally
, the old shop was demolished, and now
this
area has new restaurants in the centre. To the north-west of
this
village
, we can notice some new housing at
this
time, but in 1995 there
were
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not much housing.
In addition
, the area had the hotel on the east side without any car parks,
however
, it has a connected car
park
to the hotel,
whereas
the cafe just below the hotel remains unchanged.
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