The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates the previous plan for the

village

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of Ryemouth in 1995 and its current condition.

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, it is noticeable that before

this

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village

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had a big forest

park

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however

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, there is nothing left of

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park

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, we can notice that they've built a fishing port and some new fish markets. The

village

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of Reymouth originally consisted of farmland to the east-north, but

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has now been replaced by golf courts and the forest

park

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associated with the farmland has

also

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been destroyed and changed by new tennis courts. We can see that the

village

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now has no fishing port to the south of

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map and some fish markets because

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they have replaced the markets with apartments.

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, the old shop was demolished, and now

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area has new restaurants in the centre. To the north-west of

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village

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, we can notice some new housing at

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time, but in 1995 there

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not much housing.

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, the area had the hotel on the east side without any car parks,

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, it has a connected car

park

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to the hotel,

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the cafe just below the hotel remains unchanged.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

194 words

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