The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the average weather conditions in
Dubai
, Paris
, and Sydney for a year.
Overall
, the temperatures in Paris
and Dubai
surged dramatically till the middle of the year, then
dropped. Sydney plummeted significantly and rose again in the end.
Paris
had the lowest temperature at 5 degrees Celsius among other countries at the beginning and had a rapid growth till July. After August it started falling almost at the same speed as before. Dubai
's temperature increased consistently for half of the year. After that, it went down sharply.
Sydney had the highest degree compared to Paris
and Dubai
in January but plunged rapidly till July and went back up again with a similar digit as the starting.Submitted by anzuman.asha13 on
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