Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center it runs to save money. Write to your local council. In your letter . Let us know how you and your friends or family can use the center . explain why a sports and leisure center is important to the local community . describe the possible effects on the local population if the center were to close Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to enter any address. Start your letter like this:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My friends and I play
sports
at the sports
center
. I participate in boxing. My friends participate in various Change the spelling
centre
sports
. For example
, swimming, football, basketball, boxing, volleyball and others. Sometimes we leave the sports
center
and go to the Change the spelling
centre
leisure
. I often go to the leisure
center
with my family. Because the Change the spelling
centre
leisure
center
is designed to come with the family. When my mom and dad come from work, we go to the Change the spelling
centre
leisure
center
. Change the spelling
centre
Then
I myself go to the leisure
center
after class. I like the variety of delicious drinks and snacks there.
A Change the spelling
centre
sports
center
and Change the spelling
centre
leisure
center
are very important to the local community. Because the Change the spelling
centre
sports
center
helps children and young Change the spelling
centre
people
to be healthy and not to waste their free time. And the leisure
center
helps Change the spelling
centre
people
to have fun and relax when they are tired.
If both centers
were to close, there could be a huge impact on local residents. Because children and young Change the spelling
centres
people
have a lot of time and do not know what to use it for. For example
, I have been going to the sports
center
for five years. And in the recreation Change the spelling
centre
center
, Change the spelling
centre
people
have fun. If he closes this
center
too. People
end up in a very bad situation.
I look forward to hear
you.
Yours faithfully,
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structure and use more connecting phrases. This will make your writing flow better and improve readability.
Task Achievement
Ensure you use formal language consistently throughout the letter. Avoid using casual phrases to maintain a formal tone.
Task Achievement
You have addressed all the parts of the prompt effectively, detailing how you and your friends use the center, its importance, and the potential impact of its closure.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and well-structured, enhancing the overall tone of the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph presents a distinct idea, which helps in organizing your thoughts clearly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite