The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. (rewrite)
The diagram illustrates the process involved in producing carbonated drinks, starting from
water
purification and ending with the distribution of the final products to retail outlets.
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Overall
, the production of carbonated beverages involves five distinct stages: Linking Words
water
purification, heating and carbonation, mixing, filtering and filling, and Use synonyms
finally
, packaging. The process is systematic and requires careful control at each stage to ensure product quality.
The first stage involves purifying raw Linking Words
water
. The Use synonyms
water
is passed through a filter to remove any impurities, Use synonyms
then
softened, and treated with chemicals to eliminate undesirable odors. Once purified, the Linking Words
water
is pumped into electric heaters for the heating process. After being heated, the Use synonyms
water
travels through a cooling pipe and enters the carbonation chamber, where it is infused with carbon dioxide to create carbonated Use synonyms
water
.
In the next stage, the carbonated Use synonyms
water
is transferred to a mixing tank. Here, Use synonyms
color
, syrup, and Change the spelling
colour
flavor
are added Change the spelling
flavour
according to
the desired beverage recipe. The mixture is Linking Words
then
thoroughly blended to ensure uniformity. Linking Words
Following
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this
, the drink is filtered to remove any residual solids and Linking Words
then
filled into bottles and cans, depending on packaging requirements.
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Finally
, the filled bottles and cans are packaged and transported by lorries to various supermarkets and retailers, ready for distribution to consumers.Linking Words
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