The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic games. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the amount of
medals
took
by the best ten nations in the London 2012 Olympic Verb problem
won
games
.
Capitalize word
Games
Overall
, it is clear from the table that USA
is in the first Correct article usage
the USA
place
, while
Australia in
the Add a missing verb
is in
last
despite of fact that their total medals
more
than Hungary.
In 2012, United States Add a missing verb
are more
sportsmens
Correct your spelling
sportsmen
win
46 Wrong verb form
won
gold
medals
, 29 silver medals
and 29 bronze. Additionally
, it is the maximum number
of gold
and silver medals
among the
all countries and the peak Remove the article
apply
number
of bronze medals
took Russia with 32 medals
in total 82 and stay
at fourth Wrong verb form
stayed
place
in the Olymic
. China and Correct your spelling
Olympic
Olympics
UK
took second and third Correct article usage
the UK
place
with overall
88 and 65 medals
, respectively. Moreover
, South Korea with 28 medals
took 5st
Change the ending
5th
place
.
Furthermore
, Germany and France with same
Change the article
a same
the same
number
of gold
medals
took 6th and 7th places, but Germany had 10 medals
more than France, so it is
one step higher than him. Following that, Italy Wrong verb form
was
get
Change the verb form
gets
8st
Change the ending
8th
place
with 28 medals
. Despite of fact that Hungary took lower
Add an article
a lower
number
of medals
with 17 in total, it took more
valuable Correct article usage
a more
place
than Australia with 35 medals
and it is gives
us that Verb problem
shows
number
of Correct article usage
the number
gold
medals
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
very
important than Rephrase
more
total
of every Add an article
a total
the total
medals
.Change to a singular noun
medal
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, place, gold, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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