The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that encouraging the movement of citizens from the countryside to the

city

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centre is the ideal option to solve

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environmental problems,

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as traffic congestion and air pollution. Personally, I completely disagree with

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statement, and

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essay, I will

discussed

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the supported statements.

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with, the increasing number of populations in a

city

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will impact on the higher number of

vechicles'

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vehicles

consumption for human daily transportation. In modern

area

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, the distance from the housing region to the workplace and public places

often

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far away so transportation is the key to help their mobilization. The comfortable feeling

to have

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their own cars or bikes will support every

individuals

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movement from one place to another place.

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, with private transport, everyone could feel free and can predict their time to go somewhere.

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,

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would not overlook the other sides too. There are several solutions that must be complemented. The enhancement of public transportation can attract

humanbeing

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human being

human beings

to do their

activies

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activities

with public transport,

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of having

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by

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their own.

Government

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could make it as convenient as possible and make the schedule more frequent with the regulation or policy.

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,

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the discussion,

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mobility changing

of

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the citizens of a

city

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to another

city

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would be the main solution to reduce the current traffic and pollution problems, I believe there is another complemented policy that can support it like the amenities for the public.