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The table below shows the production of milk annualyin four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk annualyin four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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The table provides information about
milk
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 per year in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010. It can be seen that
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Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 produced the highest amounts of
milk
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, meanwhile,
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 produced much less than
other
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the other
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 two countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 produced 11,262,000
liters
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litres
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 of
milk
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, which is the highest
amount
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 compared to
other
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the other
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 three countries, and
the
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second one is
Australia
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that
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which
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 produced 11,246,000
liters
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litres
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 of
milk
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.
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 manufactured much less
amount
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 of
milk
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, which is 87,000 and 26,000
liters
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litres
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 of
milk
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 respectively. In 2000,
still
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still,
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 the
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 manufactured more
milk
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 than
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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, which are 11,155,000 and 11,105,000 respectively.
Tanzania
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 has experienced an increase in the production of
milk
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that
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which
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 is 1,42,000, and
Guatemala
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also
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 produced more than in the past, which is 55,000. In 2010, the production of
milk
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 had a growth of 11,466,000 in the
Netherlands
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,
meanwhile
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Australia
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 experienced a decline
manufacturing
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in manufacturing
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milk
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that
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which
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 is 9,165,000.
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,
Tanzania
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 produced the highest
amount
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 of
milk
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 which is 1,55,000 compared to the past periods,
also
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Guatemala
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 increased the
amount
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 of
milk
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 which is 84,000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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