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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the changes which will take place in Norbiton's town, in the future,
while
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 showing how the same place looks in present. Overview, there will be many changes in the upcoming years,
however
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 the most noticeable are the development of housing and
elimination
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the elimination
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 of factories.
According to
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 the map, the area used by the factory will be replaced by housing,
moreover
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, schools will be built in the
south-east
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southeast
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 corner. The area surrounding the roundabout will be used for the development of shops, in
southwest
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a southwest
the southwest
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 direction, and a medical centre in the southeast direction.
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, the river flowing will be divided by a path connecting to a new path in the north displacing farmland to the northeast corner. A small roundabout will be developed in the south which will be connected to the existing roundabout as well and a playground will be situated on the east side of Norniton town.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • existing features
  • industrial area
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • office buildings
  • proposed changes
  • new developments
  • green spaces
  • infrastructure improvements
  • compare
  • current industrial area
  • planned development
  • land use
  • aesthetics
  • functionality
  • potential benefits
  • drawbacks
  • local community
  • job creation
  • environmental impact
  • quality of life
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