The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
The table compares the yearly
milk
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production in four different nations during the years 1990-2000-2010. It's clear that the Netherlands was the highest manufacturer of
milk
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in 2010.
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, Guatemala experienced the lowest trends in 1990. In 1990, 11,262,000
litres
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of
milk
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were
manufactured
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produced
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in the Netherlands , and Australia was the second most
produced
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productive
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milk
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,
11,245,000
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with 11,245,000
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litres
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.
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, these trends recorded a small decrease in both nations, 11,155,000 and 11,105,000 , respectively. Afterwards, the manufacturing process recorded a considerable increase in the Netherlands , 11,466,000, but in Australia continued a decrease to 9,105,000 in 2010. The production of
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in 1990, Tanzania produced 87,000
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of
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,
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Grachemalia's production was approximately three times lower, and
this
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represented the lowest figure among all countries. An increase was observed with both Tanzania and Guatemala in 2000, 142000 and 55,000
litres
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respectively , and
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process continued to increase in 2010 , Tanzania recorded 155,000
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of
milk
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while
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Guatemala experienced 84,000

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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