The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie chart gives data on online vending for retail sections in Canada in 2005 and 2010
Overall
, it is clear that
in these years the major sales
were in the Electronics and Appliance section
. Also
the video games sector percentage was almost equal with Add a comma
Also,
the
difference of 5%.
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sales
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percentages
sales
were in this
sector. Besides
, the smallest percentage 18% of sales
was in the Video games section
.
Furthermore
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, as well with almost equal percentages the Electronics and appliances had 2% less sales
. However
, as Video games became more popular the sales
increased by 5% and had 23%. Nevertheless
, Home furnishings sales
decreased by 10% and became 15%.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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