The charts below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of

sales

and

rentals

per year of movies from an individual shop from 2002 to 2011. There are four different formats including

rentals

VHS

sales

DVD

sales

, and

Blu-ray

sales

. Units are measured in

sales

. Overview, in 2002,

rentals

were the highest format with around 185,000

sales

, followed by

VHS

, which ranked

second,

with about 85,000

sales

, and the third was

DVD

with only 45,000

sales

, respectively.

Moreover

, there was still no sign of

Blu-ray

's play.

However

, in the past ten years, there has been a downward trend for

rentals

. It decreased continuously from 185,000

sales

in 2002 to just 55,000

rentals

in 2011.

Similarly

, the number of

VHS

rentals

also

dropped significantly from 2002 to 2005 and began to disappear after 2006.

On the other hand

, there was a new type of film known as

Blu-ray

. It started rising in 2007 and increased to about 12,000

sales

in 2011.

Lastly

, the number of

DVD

sales

was the only group with an upward trend. It went up massively from 2002 and peaked in 2007 with 215,000

rentals

. After that, it dropped a little to 180,000 in the latest year. In conclusion, in 2011, There were only three categories:

DVD

rentals

, and

Blu-ray

Furthermore

VHS

was no longer sold in a particular store.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, rentals, vhs, dvd, blu-ray with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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The charts below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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