The map shows the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015

The map shows the outskirts of the town of Fosbury  in 1980 and 2015
The map illustrates the changes in the outskirts of a city called Fosbury over 35 years, from 1980 to 2015. As it is evident, the town had undergone a great alteration in
this
period of time. In 2015,
this
city area became more commercial than its 1980 version. In 1980, there were vast areas of fields on the right side of the map, which were demolished by the year 2015 and replaced with warehouses.
Also
, the grocer’s shop was developed, turning into a huge supermarket, as there was more space
due to
the knockdown of the block of flats and terraced houses.
In addition
, a car park was added close to the supermarket. compared to 1980, the left part of
this
neighbourhood had become more residential by 2015. The park was relocated close to the newly constructed roundabout, giving its location to the terraced houses.
Besides
these changes, the tennis courts were converted into a larger sports centre to be more recreational.
To sum up
,
this
section of the town faced several changes shifting to a more convenient place for living, during these 35 years.
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