You local council is considering closing sports and leisure that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you about

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closing

this

centre

because it is useful to many people including me and my family and

also

my friends.

Firstly

, In the evening my family always go to

this

centre

for walking and my friends often exercise in the morning.

Therefore

we immensely need

thus

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this

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centre

to

be exist

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there.

Secondly

,

this

centre

gives us a sense of community

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that

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we

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belong

to

this

city. In my opinion, If you take

such

a decision, it would affect us badly. Closing

this

centre

would be

disaster

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a disaster

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for both

olders

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older

and

minors

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residents. If

this

centre

is

closing

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closed

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, people could become less engaged in sports activities which will

be definitely affect

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definitely affect

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their health. I believe that question deserves close attention. Yours faithfully, Shabnam