The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided graph illustrates the
proportion
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of individuals in a nation, calculating the distribution of various age groups who visited museums at least one time in 2006,2011 and 2016.
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, it was obvious that the age between 55 and 64 comprised the largest percentage of visited times in 2006 and 2011;
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, the
proportion
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of the population between 35 and 44
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took the lead among others in 2016. To be more specific, people aged from 55 to 64 reached a peak of 40% in 2006. The second highest group is between 25 and 34 which made up roughly 26%, the next is from 15 to 24 with precisely 25%, followed by those over 65
years
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, accounting for around 21%, and the remaining group shared an identical figure of 20%. In terms of 2011, ages 35 to 64
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occupied the maximal
proportion
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of the population with 35%,followed by ages between 25 and 54 composed 30%
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, and
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the next is between 15 and 24 with about 26%, and
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come over 65
years
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took up about 18%.
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,
according to
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the year 2016, the age between 35 and 44 has the most citizens visiting museums, 25-34
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is next with approximately 33%
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45-54 and 55-64 have the same
proportion
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of 30%, and eventually 15-24 and over 65
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consisted of 25%
as well as
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roughly 23% respectively.
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