The pie charts compare how much the proportions of three fast-food outlets are favoured by teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 with projections for 2027.

The pie charts compare how much the proportions of three fast-food outlets are favoured by teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 with projections for 2027.
The pie charts show teenagers' favourite 3 fast-food outlets in
Vietnam
and
Indonesia
in the years 2017 and 2027.
It is clear that
McDonald
's is the most popular outlet in both of the countries,
whereas
KFC
and
Burger
King are the least popular in
Vietnam
and
Indonesia
respectively. In 2007,
McDonald
's was the most favourite firm in
Vietnam
with 43,1% and in
Indonesia
with 60,8%.
However
, predictions say that demand for
McDonald
's is going to increase in 2027 by 14,3% in
Vietnam
and decrease by around the same amount in
Indonesia
.
Therefore
,
McDonald
's will overtake
Burger
King in
Vietnam
,
while
in
Indonesia
it will remain in first place in
this
competition. The other two restaurants,
Burger
King and
KFC
, are
also
projected in
this
pie chart.
KFC
saw a rise in
Vietnam
and
Indonesia
by 2.2% and 15.4% respectively,
whereas
Burger
King saw a decline of 13.8% and 3.1% respectively. As you can see, in 2027,
KFC
will be twice as much as demanded in 2017 in
Indonesia
,
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and steadily rose in
Vietnam
.
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