The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The bar graph down demonstrates the spending on entertainment in Asia and

Europe

and the United States from 1995 till 2000 It is obvious from the graph that all 3 countries had a dramatic rise during the 5 years

However

, the United States had the biggest increase and

Europe

was

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had

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the lowest

According to

what is shown television had an obvious increase in Asia starting at nearly 25 and ending at almost 50

in contrast

, cinema and video were steady during these years

overall

Asia had jumped from 67 to 110

On the other hand

television in

Europe

had experienced a rise

with

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to

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almost 45 in 1995 and ended at nearly 55 in 2000,both publishing and music remained,

however

, cinema had

slight

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a slight

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growth

Overall

we can say that

Europe

experienced a small change from 1995 with 97 and reaching 131 after 5 years, The United States experienced the most significant change with 184 in 1995 and reaching 257 in 2000 in other words television was the most clear among others with almost 55 and reaching almost 100

However

publishing and video remained and cinema with music had a slight jump.