The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The diagram gives information about a cyclical process of producing biofuel
which
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called
ethanol
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps in total that can be divided into 3 main stages: creating
celluose
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cellulose
, manufacturing
ethanol
and using
ethanol
, the cycle repeats after the final
stage
. In the first
stage
- creating cellulose, workers have to harvest raw materials from the plants and trees which are grown enough. After that, those materials are sent to a
pre processing
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machine and they become cellulose.
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the second
stage
, cellulose, which is the result of
first
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the first
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stage
, is processed by
the
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scientists and
it
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transforms
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to
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sugars. Microbes are added to the sugars to get the final product-
ethanol
. In the final
stage
,
ethanol
is used as energy for transportation
such
as cars, trucks, planes… CO2 which
called
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carbon dioxide is a result of using
ethanol
and it goes
to
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the atmosphere after being released.
Finally
, it combines with the sunlight to become the energy to grow plants and trees and the cycle starts again.
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