The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The diagram gives information about a cyclical process of producing biofuel
which
called Correct pronoun usage
apply
ethanol
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps in total that can be divided into 3 main stages: creating celluose
, manufacturing Correct your spelling
cellulose
ethanol
and using ethanol
, the cycle repeats after the final stage
.
In the first stage
- creating cellulose, workers have to harvest raw materials from the plants and trees which are grown enough. After that, those materials are sent to a pre processing
machine and they become cellulose. Add a hyphen
pre-processing
Going to
the second Verb problem
In
stage
, cellulose, which is the result of first
Change the article
the first
stage
, is processed by the
scientists and Correct article usage
apply
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
transforms
Wrong verb form
transformed
to
sugars. Microbes are added to the sugars to get the final product-Change preposition
into
ethanol
.
In the final stage
, ethanol
is used as energy for transportation such
as cars, trucks, planes… CO2 which called
carbon dioxide is a result of using Add a missing verb
is called
ethanol
and it goes to
the atmosphere after being released. Change preposition
into
Finally
, it combines with the sunlight to become the energy to grow plants and trees and the cycle starts again.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, stage with synonyms.
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