The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates drinking
habits
from different age
groups found in Americans.
Never drinker is the most drinking
habit, which is found in Americans, Correct word choice
common drinking
whereas
others
drinking Correct quantifier usage
other
habits
experience kinds of variation
in all Fix the agreement mistake
variations
age
groups. In the 16-24 age
group, never drinkers
are about 60% from
the total population, light Change preposition
of
drinkers
are in the second position for donating about 25%, ex-drinkers
are 10% and finally
are the heavy drinkers
donating approximately only 5%.
The 55 to 64 and 64 to 74 age
group
experience a similar condition Fix the agreement mistake
groups
for
their drinking Change preposition
in
habits
. Both are having never drinker
and ex Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
drinker
as most of the population, Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
in
the Change preposition
apply
age
65 to 74 consists nearly 90 % of both drinking habits
(45% for the never drinkers
and 45% for ex
Add a hyphen
ex-drinkers
drinkers
) and in
the Change preposition
apply
age
of 55 to 64 consists about 75% (about 50% for never drinkers
and 25% for ex drinkers
).
In conclusion, the majority of drinking habits
found in Americans are never drinkers
because it is
discovered as the most Wrong verb form
been
drinking
Correct word choice
common drinking
habits
in all Fix the agreement mistake
habit
age
groups.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words habits, age, drinkers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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