The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates drinking
habits
from different Use synonyms
age
groups found in Americans.
Never drinker is the most Use synonyms
drinking
habit, which is found in Americans, Correct word choice
common drinking
whereas
Linking Words
others
drinking Correct quantifier usage
other
habits
experience kinds of Use synonyms
variation
in all Fix the agreement mistake
variations
age
groups. In the 16-24 Use synonyms
age
group, never Use synonyms
drinkers
are about 60% Use synonyms
from
the total population, light Change preposition
of
drinkers
are in the second position for donating about 25%, ex-Use synonyms
drinkers
are 10% and Use synonyms
finally
are the heavy Linking Words
drinkers
donating approximately only 5%.
The 55 to 64 and 64 to 74 Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
experience a similar condition Fix the agreement mistake
groups
for
their drinking Change preposition
in
habits
. Both are having never Use synonyms
drinker
and ex Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
drinker
as most of the population, Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
in
the Change preposition
apply
age
65 to 74 consists nearly 90 % of both drinking Use synonyms
habits
(45% for the never Use synonyms
drinkers
and 45% for Use synonyms
ex
Add a hyphen
ex-drinkers
drinkers
) and Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
apply
age
of 55 to 64 consists about 75% (about 50% for never Use synonyms
drinkers
and 25% for ex Use synonyms
drinkers
).
In conclusion, the majority of drinking Use synonyms
habits
found in Americans are never Use synonyms
drinkers
because it Use synonyms
is
discovered as the most Wrong verb form
been
drinking
Correct word choice
common drinking
Use synonyms
habits
in all Fix the agreement mistake
habit
age
groups.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words habits, age, drinkers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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