The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film.s from a particular store between 2002 and 2011, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives annual information about
rentals
and three types of sales
from a particular store from 2002 to 2011, almost a decade.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is clear that
the number of rentals
declined every year, while
DVD
sales
boomed compared to other sales
products.
To begin
with, the number of rentals
in 2002 was approximately 190 thousand
and was at the top of the list for that year compared to others, whereas
VHS and DVD
sales
were 90 thousand
and 40 thousand
, respectively. After half a decade, DVD
sales
incredibly grew to more than 200 thousand
, while
rentals
dropped to 130 thousand
. Unfortunately, VHS sales
were lost on the list. In 2011, rentals
further
fell to 50 thousand
, Blu-ray sales
appeared and took almost 10 thousand
, and also
DVD
sales
declined slightly to 180 thousand
but still stayed at the top of the listSubmitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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