The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film.s from a particular store between 2002 and 2011, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film.s from a particular store between 2002 and 2011, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives annual information about
rentals
and three types of
sales
from a particular store from 2002 to 2011, almost a decade. Looking from an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the number of
rentals
declined every year,
while
DVD
sales
boomed compared to other
sales
products.
To begin
with, the number of
rentals
in 2002 was approximately 190
thousand
and was at the top of the list for that year compared to others,
whereas
VHS and
DVD
sales
were 90
thousand
and 40
thousand
, respectively. After half a decade,
DVD
sales
incredibly grew to more than 200
thousand
,
while
rentals
dropped to 130
thousand
. Unfortunately, VHS
sales
were lost on the list. In 2011,
rentals
further
fell to 50
thousand
, Blu-ray
sales
appeared and took almost 10
thousand
, and
also
DVD
sales
declined slightly to 180
thousand
but still stayed at the top of the list
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rentals, sales, dvd, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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