The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film.s from a particular store between 2002 and 2011, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of film.s from a particular store between 2002 and 2011, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives annual information about
rentals
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and three types of
sales
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from a particular store from 2002 to 2011, almost a decade. Looking from an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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the number of
rentals
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declined every year,
while
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DVD
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sales
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boomed compared to other
sales
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products.
To begin
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with, the number of
rentals
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in 2002 was approximately 190
thousand
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and was at the top of the list for that year compared to others,
whereas
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VHS and
DVD
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sales
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were 90
thousand
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and 40
thousand
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, respectively. After half a decade,
DVD
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sales
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incredibly grew to more than 200
thousand
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,
while
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rentals
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dropped to 130
thousand
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. Unfortunately, VHS
sales
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were lost on the list. In 2011,
rentals
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further
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fell to 50
thousand
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, Blu-ray
sales
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appeared and took almost 10
thousand
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, and
also
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DVD
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sales
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declined slightly to 180
thousand
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but still stayed at the top of the list
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rentals, sales, dvd, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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