The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in the UK in 2008
Information pertaining to the
number
of gender
who played common Change to a plural noun
genders
sports
in the Unuted
Kingdom during 2008 has been provided in the given bar chart.
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United
It is clear that
male
had the Fix the agreement mistake
males
higher
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highest
number
of participants in all sports
with the exception of swimming netball
and jogging. Additionally
, there was greatest
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the greatest
dispare
in Correct your spelling
disparity
netball
by gender
.
Looking at the further
detail, it is apparent that the differences between sexes was
noticeable. Regarding soccer, there was nearly 25% of Change the verb form
were
participants
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the participants
is
male and just 5% Wrong verb form
were
is
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sports
, males
doubled females
at 20% to 10%. For cricket, males
outnumbered females
by 5:1 at 10% to 2%. The figure was similar to gender
rate for table tennis, where Correct article usage
the gender
males
numbered at about 8% against males
approximately
3%.
Moving on to the remaining Change preposition
at approximately
sports
. There was an opposite trend in swimming, netball
and jogging. There was
25% Change the verb form
were
females
in netball
, while
just had
nearly 2% Unnecessary verb
apply
males
, making it as
the biggest Change preposition
apply
difenrences
. There was a lower Correct your spelling
differences
difference
number
in swimming where females
outnumbered males
at 22% to 14%. Jogging had the lowest number
in both gender
, there was 4% for Fix the agreement mistake
genders
females
and 3% for males
. Basketball and tennis saw the nearly same in gender
where just about 6% to 7% participants.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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