Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre •explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community •describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
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Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with closing a sports and leisure
centre
. The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is, local people. Well, consequences
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the consequences
on
closing the Change preposition
of
centre
is
bad. After Change the verb form
are
centre
Add an article
the centre
closed
locals get bored easily Wrong verb form
closes
qnd
there is no Correct your spelling
and
sport
center young children can not train for championships and Change the noun form
sports
world
Olympics. The worst thing is there will be no place to Correct article usage
the world
chit chat
with my friends or no place for my family to have fun. Add a hyphen
chit-chat
In addition
to this
there will be no tournament in the near future if Add a comma
this,
center
closes. I am not all pleased that because closing the Add an article
the center
centre
won't help the economy, but it will lead to decrease
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a decrease
the
economy. So closing the sports and leisure Change preposition
in the
centre
will cost the peoples happiness and I hope you are not going to close the centre
. I look forward to receiving your explanation.
Yours faithfully
Safarov AbrorjonSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples of how you and your friends or family use the centre. This will make your argument more compelling.
coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into distinct paragraphs, each addressing a specific point mentioned in the prompt. This will improve the overall coherence and clarity of your letter.
task achievement
Make sure to maintain a formal writing tone throughout your letter. Avoid using informal phrases like 'chit chat.'
task achievement
You have addressed all three bullet points in the prompt, making your response complete.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and formal, which is good for this type of letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.