The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the average number of
days
with rainfall per
month
in two Australian cities:
Brisbane
and
Canberra
,
while
the line chart represents the fluctuations in average daily temperatures in the specified cities.
Overall
, even though
Canberra
witnesses comparatively lower temperatures,
Brisbane
experiences more rainfall most of the time throughout the year.
According to
the supplied line graph, in
Brisbane
, the
temperature
tends to remain between 20
degrees
Celsius
to 30
degrees
Celsius
in February; the
temperature
gap reduces in April, before becoming widened
month
on
month
till October. The
temperature
range restores to its original value by the end of the year in December.
On the contrary
, the disparity between the highest and lowest
temperature
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temperatures
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in
Canberra
is extreme; the lowest
temperature
recorded in January is recorded to be just below 15
degrees
Celsius
whereas
the highest number
are
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is
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at just over 25
degrees
Celsius
. The
temperature
gap continues to become huge for the rest of the
month
.
According to
the bar chart, showering occurs for approximately half of the
month
in the first four and
last
months of the year in
Brisbane
, whilst it rains just well over 6
days
in
Canberra
during the same months.
In contrast
, the summer months, namely June, July, August, September, and October, witness a diametrically opposite trend; showering occurs for precisely 10
days
every
month
,
whereas
in
Brisbane
, just below 10
days
are wet.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words days, month, brisbane, canberra, temperature, degrees, celsius with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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