The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two images illustrate the current layout of a town in Norbiton, which is an industrial region, and a design for
future
development. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that in the
future
,
this
area
will be used as a residential
area
.
Also
, there will be more facilities and amenities in the
future
layout. In the
future
, all factories will be flattened, and
instead
, there will be more housing blocks.
Also
, there will be another square on the southern part of the map, which is smaller than the square
that is
located at the centre.
While
, in the current layout there are only a few routes, in the
future
plan, there will be more routes in each direction of the site. Regarding the facilities, there will be a school in the easternmost part of the
area
, and in front of it, there will be a relatively large playground.
Similarly
, a medical centre and a couple of shops will be built in the southern part of the
area
, just above the southern square.
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  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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