The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of households in the United States based on their annual
income
in three years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
In the year
2007, the annual income
of almost 30 million houses are
Verb problem
was at
atleast
$100,000. In the Correct your spelling
least
year
2011
a slight reduction Add a comma
2011,
has
noticed in Verb problem
was
this
trend, however
in 2015, more than 30 millions
families Change to singular
million
recieved
Correct your spelling
received
an
yearly Change the article
a
income
of $100,000 or more.
25 million families were earning less than $25,000 per year
in the year
2007, followed by a little above 25 million families recieved
an earning between $25,000-50,000. Both Correct your spelling
received
the
segments exhibited a rise in 2011 and 2015.
Annual Correct article usage
apply
earning
of about 15 Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
millions
households which was the least in all three years were in between &75,000-$100,000. Change to singular
million
In addition
, the houses recieving
an Correct your spelling
receiving
income
of 50,000-75,000 stayed at a
same level in 2007, 2011 and 2015.Correct article usage
the
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