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The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the number of households in the United States based on their annual
income
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 in three years 2007, 2011 and 2015. In the
year
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 2007, the annual
income
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 of almost 30 million houses
are
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was at
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atleast
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least
 $100,000. In the
year
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2011
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2011,
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 a slight reduction
has
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was
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 noticed in
this
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 trend,
however
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 in 2015, more than 30
millions
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million
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 families
recieved
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received
an
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a
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 yearly
income
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 of $100,000 or more. 25 million families were earning less than $25,000 per
year
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 in the
year
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 2007, followed by a little above 25 million families
recieved
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received
 an earning between $25,000-50,000. Both
the
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apply
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segments exhibited a rise in 2011 and 2015. Annual
earning
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earnings
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 of about 15
millions
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million
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 households which was the least in all three years were in between &75,000-$100,000.
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, the houses
recieving
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receiving
 an
income
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 of 50,000-75,000 stayed at
a
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the
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 same level in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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