The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The given chart illustrates the destination of anthropology
graduates
from a university and the table provides
infromation
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information
regarding the type of
employement
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employment
and salary after 5 years of work in three different sectors. 52% of
graduates
secured
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full
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time
employment upon completion of the course. 15% of individuals engaged in
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time
jobs. The
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destination
of 8% of
graduates
are
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not known and a similar amount of students started doing
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time
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study. 12% of
graduates
are unemployed and 5%
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doing
part
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time
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postgrad study. After 5 years of work, as a freelance consultant,
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the majority
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of students earn more than $75,000,
in
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which 40%
recieve
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receive
and
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income
more
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of more
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than $100,000. In
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the government
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sector, 50% earn more than $100,000 and 30% earn more than $75,000. Only 5% in
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and government
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earns
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in
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between $25,00 and $49,999.
On the other hand
, in private companies,
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of
graduates
recieve
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receive
an income in between $50,000 and 74,999 followed by 30% of
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the population
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with more than $100,000 and 25% of people with more than $75,000 respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate degree
  • anthropology graduates
  • career paths
  • further education
  • full-time employment
  • part-time work
  • self-employment
  • postgraduate studies
  • salary progression
  • salary growth
  • government sector
  • private sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • demand for anthropologists
  • sector-specific skills
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