Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

While

it is widely debated over the large expenses on family

celebrations

, some believe that it created a priceless memory among the family members, others argue that

such

investment

is consider

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to be a waste of money and no need to spend that extra-bills. Both

point

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points

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of view and

opinion

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opinions

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toward

this

controversial topic will be

further

discussed in

this

essay.

To begin

with, it may seem sensible for some to believe that

celebrations

of the family is a special

events

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that you need to put extra effort

on

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it

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apply

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, especially money.

This

is

possibly

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because the larger the payment, the greater the

amount

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of

affections

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affection

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to

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for

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their

love

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one

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ones

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as they. Take graduation

celebration

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celebrations

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in Thailand,

for example

; Thai people generally

celebrates

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celebrate

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these

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academic success of their members

in

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on

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a large scale

such

as providing cartering

service

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services

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for nearby

neighbourhood

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and relatives to congratulate their

beloved

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loved

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one's

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. Many opponents of

this

idea might

opposed

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that family

celebrations

can be done frugally yet impact and heartfelt. To simply explain, it is understandable that happiness for each family

are

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viewed differently,

while

some might appreciate simple but meaningful acts like spending quality time together over enjoying a luxurious

five star

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dinner that could make their financial problem.

However

, I personally argue in favour of the latter claim seeing that family events can be cherished

evenif

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even if

a limited budget. Take my family,

for example

; we generally set up a family gathering as

simplest

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as it can be, yet it

create

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creates

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heartwarming as well

such

costly

celebrations

. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that spending

costly

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family celebration can be viewed as a waste of money, I am of the opinion that there is no need

such

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for such

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large

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a large

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investment

on

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in

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an event to

showing

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love and bonding among the family as we all can appreciate at it simplest.